英文講稿

這是我自己打的演講稿喲！裡面是紀錄去蘇格蘭遊學的事情^^，但是像我這種學自然英語的可憐小孩，一點文法概念都沒有><，所以給老師改過之後，一蹋糊塗><，有些句子甚至走樣了，根本和我原來的文藝不同><！
My Favorite Country Fanny Yang
Every time when I look over the photographs, Scotland is the place that have wonderful memories the most. Not just because it’s the country that I have been for International Summer Camp, no matter the peaceful and natural scenery, the friendly people or novelty products, I like them all.

I been there in the Summer in 2005, I had the unforgettable trip with my English teacher and friends, we been to Salisbury, a small town in England for two weeks first, then went to Hawthorn School in Edinburgh. We lived in the school, the weather there is very distinct from weather in Taiwan. It is always hot in Summer in Taiwan, and the air conditioning are always on, but there, we wore jacket all day, even at the high noon!

It’s crowd everywhere in Taiwan, and we seldom can see animals around only if we’re at the zoo. But everyday I got up there, I can heard birds chirping, feel wind blowing, and saw hedgehog going around. It made me happy, and had a nice start of a new day. We often talked about what we saw today, and it’s a happy time to share.

We had different kinds of activities there, I like many of them, like badminton, bike ride and Sweet making. I like badminton just because it’s the sport I like the most. But Bike ride is not just for one reason. Friends always go together, riding out through the small road, we saw natural scenery on the way of riding. Flower gardens all away long, colorful flowers just like our colorful memories.

Also, going shopping at the stores, were always interesting for girls. The thing we bought most were the plastic string. It’s not special, but it’s colorful and easy bring, we played it every where, every time, and even sleeping we hold it in our hand. Other things we bought, like tasty fruit tea, on sale books and some things we like. I bought “Charlie and the chocolate factory” story novel there, the movie were really popular that time.

Another thing I spent lots of money to bought it, is one kind of bag named “zip-it”, the ”bag” isn’t special, but how to ”make it” really attract us. It’s a common long textile with zip when you haven’t zip it up, but after zipping, a thick textile can become a bag!!

I like Scotland, I like Edinburgh, I like Hawthorn. I’ll go there again in the future, may be not for Summer camp only, also for keeping the wonderful memories.
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下面這片是修改過的講稿，可能還有一些小紕漏(我沒有完全照老師的指示)，但是比較之下，文法好多了，我自己看來，倒是有些面目全非><！
My Favorite Country
Every time when I look over the photographs, Scotland is the place that I have wonderful memories the most. It’s the country that I have been for International Summer Camp. I like it not only because of the peaceful and natural scenery, but also the friendly people and the novelty products.

I went to Scotland in the summer of 2005, and I had an unforgettable trip with my English teacher and friends. Salisbury is a small town in England. We stayed there for two weeks. Then we went to Hawthorn School in Edinburgh. We stayed in the school for a two-week long summer camp. The weather there is very distinct from the weather in Taiwan. It is always hot in summer in Taiwan and the air conditioning is always on. But in Edinburgh, we wore jacket all day, even at the high noon!

I like the quiet place in Edinburgh. Everyday I got up, I heard birds chirping, I felt winds blowing, and I saw hedgehog going around. It made me happy, and had a nice start of a new day.

We had different kinds of activities at school. I like most of them, such as playing badminton, bike riding and Sweet making. I like badminton just because it’s the sport I like the most. I also like to go bike riding. Friends can always go together, riding out through the country road, and we can see natural scenery on the way of riding.

Besides, going shopping at the stores is always interesting to girls. The plastic string was the thing we bought most. It’s not special, but it’s colorful and easy to bring. We played it every where, and every time. We also bought some tasty fruit tea, books on sale and some things we like. I bought a novel named “Charlie and the chocolate factory” there, because the movie was really popular at that time.

I also spent lots of money on a special kind of bag named “zip-it”. The ”bag” isn’t special, but how to ”make it” really attracts us. It’s a common long textile with zip before zip it up, but after we zips it up, the thick textile can become a bag!!

I like Scotland. I like Edinburgh. I like Hawthorn. I will go there again in the future. Maybe it’s not only just for Summer Camp, but also for keeping the colorful memories that what I’ve just got.

其他參賽的同學呀，我的底稿完全在這呀！要抄襲的快來吧><，反正也沒差，很多地方我自己都不太懂了，就不信別人看了能被起來！ 要不要來"意見交流"一下其他朋友們，看到的把自己的稿子也 po 在意見區吧！